Maybe you guys can help me. I\'m writing a poem for my GF, and I know what I want to say; but I\'ve always had a problem forming it together and making a decent rhythmic pattern with it. Stuff comes to me, but I can\'t form it. Could you guys add/take away from, or form these thoughts so they sound good; or give me some suggestions to do it...

I remember that night in my bed, when you said those three words for the very first time,
That moment

When I look deeply into your eyes, or feel the soft touch of your lips against mine,
I realize how lucky I am to have you.

Every second of every day I think of you

When I’m with you, nothing else matters,
Knowing you’re there makes everything seem alright

I am so thankful for that first night, when I was able to meet you
I feel we are so right, so perfect, for one another
And I can’t stop thinking how long we will be together.

With each passing day, I still can’t believe we’ve only been together a couple of months
Even though we haven’t been together that long, I never want to think about what my life would be like without you

When I talk to or see you, I feel like we belong

I keep looking at the picture of us together, and I’m reminded of all the good times we’ve had,
And all the ones yet to come.

When I touch you, I feel so warm inside

I wish there were words that could describe how I feel for you
I’ve never felt like this for anyone before,

Know that no matter what happens or what you go through, I am always there for you

When I sleep, you are all I think of

With each passing second

-Jon